My Community and I
Senior 5 · English
My Community and I
Lesson 1 of 4
25 min
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Every Rwandan community, from a hillside village to a Kigali neighbourhood, runs on the work of people we pass every day without thinking about them: the tailor, the teller, the moto driver, the health worker. In this unit you describe your own community: its people, its jobs, its pastimes and the duties its members share. This first lesson is a personal essay by a student who has watched one trading centre all her life.
A personal essay of about 740 words by Keza, an imagined S5 student. Gatare is an invented trading centre, but centres like it line roads all over Rwanda.
1 At half past five, before the first bus has passed, the road outside our house is already talking. I hear the scrape of a metal door as Mr Habimana opens his tailor's shop, the cough of a motorbike that refuses to start, and my mother counting crates of soft drinks into the front of her shop. I have lived above that shop for all of my seventeen years, and I have learned that a trading centre keeps a timetable as strict as any school's. Nobody prints it, but everybody keeps it.
2 Gatare is not a town. It is one tarmac road with about forty buildings along it, a health post at one end and a school at the other. Yet almost everything a family needs can be found within five minutes' walk. Mr Habimana has been sewing school uniforms on the same black machine since before I was born; in September, when the school year begins, his queue stretches out of the door. Next to him, Mrs Uwase runs a mobile money kiosk, where farmers collect payment for their maize and parents pay school fees without travelling to the district town. Across the road, the SACCO opens at eight. Its teller, a young man called Eric, knows half the account holders by name and the other half by their parents' names.
3 Some of the most important work in Gatare happens away from the road. Mrs Mukamana is a community health worker. Three days a week she walks from house to house with a notebook and a set of scales. She weighs babies, reminds mothers about clinic appointments and sends anyone who is seriously ill straight to the health post. She is not a nurse, and she is the first to say so; but people trust her because she is a neighbour, and a neighbour notices that a child is losing weight long before a doctor ever sees the child. Every second Monday, an agronomist from the district visits the maize cooperative to advise its members on seed, fertiliser and pests.
4 By midday the centre slows down. The moto drivers park in the shade of the market shelter and argue about football. The carpenter, whose workshop smells of eucalyptus, is planing a door for a new house up the hill. The hairdresser is busier than anyone, because Saturday weddings mean Friday hairstyles. At one o'clock the school releases a river of blue and white uniforms, and for half an hour the road belongs to the young.
5 Gatare is changing, and it is changing fast. When my mother opened her shop, the centre had no electricity, and she kept her drinks cool in a tub of water. Today there are lights along the road, a welding workshop, and a phone-charging business that is already disappearing because almost every house now has power of its own. The road is busier than it used to be and the shops are better stocked, but the centre is also noisier, and on market days it is far dirtier. Wednesday, market day, leaves behind more plastic bags than all the other days of the week together.
6 Evening is our leisure time, and it is the part of the day I like best. On the school pitch, mixed teams play football until the ball is too dark to see. The church choir rehearses on Tuesdays and Thursdays; my best friend sings alto and says the choir is the only place where she is allowed to be loud. My younger brother has joined a reading club that meets in the school library, while I prefer drawing, which I do on the steps of our shop, sketching the faces of people who pass. Under the avocado tree, the older men play igisoro slowly, commenting on every move as if it were a national event.
7 People sometimes ask me whether I would rather live in Kigali. I am not sure. A city offers more choice: more schools, more jobs, more ways to spend an evening. But in a city you can live next door to someone for years without learning their name, and in Gatare that is simply impossible. Here, if Mr Habimana's door has not opened by six, somebody goes to check on him. That, I think, is what a community is: not a place where everyone agrees, but a place where people notice each other. The question for my generation is whether we can keep that habit while the road gets busier.
Definition
Glossary
Keza describes Gatare as if she were walking along the road. The sketch map places every business she mentions. Use it to answer the first comprehension questions.
Figure 1.1 Sketch map of Gatare, drawn from the essay.
Answer in full sentences. Questions 1 to 6 ask what the essay says; 7 to 9 ask what it means; 10 asks what you think.
Work out each meaning from the sentence around it before you look at the table.
| Word (paragraph) | Word class | Meaning in the essay | Note |
|---|---|---|---|
| strict (1) | adjective | exact; followed without exceptions | also used of people: a strict teacher |
| stretches (2) | verb | reaches over a distance | The queue stretches out of the door. |
| weighs (3) | verb | measures how heavy something is | noun: weight; do not confuse with ways |
| straight (3) | adverb | directly, without stopping | also an adjective: a straight road |
| slows down (4) | phrasal verb | becomes less busy or less fast | opposite: picks up |
| stocked (5) | adjective | supplied with goods to sell | well stocked, better stocked |
| rehearses (6) | verb | practises before a performance | noun: a rehearsal |
| notice (7) | verb | see or become aware of | noun: a notice is a written sign |
The essay names more than ten jobs. To define a job, use the pattern A ___ is a person who …, and say where the person works.
| Job | What the person does | Workplace |
|---|---|---|
| tailor | makes, alters and mends clothes | a tailor's shop |
| teller | takes in and pays out customers' money | a bank or SACCO |
| community health worker | visits homes, gives basic care and advice, refers serious cases | the village; neighbours' homes |
| agronomist | advises farmers on crops, soil and pests | farms, a cooperative, the district office |
| carpenter | makes doors, windows and furniture from wood | a workshop |
| welder | joins pieces of metal by melting them | a welding workshop |
| mobile money agent | lets customers deposit, withdraw and send money by phone | a kiosk |
Tip
Scan for the name, then read around it. For a question about one person ("What does Mrs Mukamana do …?"), run your eyes down the text looking only for the capital M of her name. Then read the two sentences around it carefully. You find the answer in seconds instead of rereading the whole essay.
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