Structure in Modern Prose
Senior 6 · Literature in English
Structure in Modern Prose
Lesson 3 of 5
25 min
Kate Chopin's "The Story of an Hour" (1894) is barely a thousand words long, and every one of them works. Here is its first sentence:
Knowing that Mrs. Mallard was afflicted with a heart trouble, great care was taken to break to her as gently as possible the news of her husband's death.
What happens (summary). Louise Mallard's sister Josephine and her husband's friend Richards tell her that her husband, Brently, has been killed in a railway accident. She weeps, then goes alone to her room and sits in an armchair facing an open window. Outside she sees the trees "all aquiver with the new spring life". Slowly, and almost against her will, a feeling rises in her, and she whispers it: "free, free, free!" Her husband had been kind and had loved her; yet she now looks forward to years that will belong to her alone. She remembers that "It was only yesterday she had thought with a shudder that life might be long." She comes downstairs at last, triumphant. At that moment the front door opens, and in walks Brently Mallard, "a little travel-stained, composedly carrying his grip-sack and umbrella". He had been far from the accident and had not even heard of it. Louise dies on the spot. The story ends:
When the doctors came they said she had died of heart disease—of the joy that kills.
Kate Chopin, "The Story of an Hour" (1894)

Definition
Irony at the end. The doctors believe she died of joy at seeing her husband alive. The reader, who has been inside her room, knows the opposite: she died of the shock of losing her freedom. Foreshadowing prepares us for the death; the point of view gives us the knowledge that turns it into irony. This is situational irony (the outcome reverses what was expected) and also dramatic irony (we know what the other characters do not).
Writers often tell events out of time order. Emily Brontë's Wuthering Heights (1847) begins: "1801.—I have just returned from a visit to my landlord—the solitary neighbour that I shall be troubled with." The speaker, Lockwood, is a stranger; to understand the violent household he has visited, he must hear the past from the housekeeper, Nelly Dean. Most of the novel is her long flashback, framed by Lockwood's present.
Achebe uses flashback on a smaller scale. Things Fall Apart opens with Okonkwo's present fame and then moves back to the wrestling match that made him famous as a young man, and further back to his father Unoka's life and debts. These early flashbacks explain the man before the plot begins to move: we understand his fear of failure because we have seen its cause.
| Device | What it can do |
|---|---|
| Flashback | Explains motives; reveals a secret at the moment of greatest effect; contrasts past and present |
| Foreshadowing | Builds suspense and unity; makes a surprising ending feel inevitable on rereading |
| Frame narrative | Adds a second point of view; raises questions of reliability (can we trust Nelly?) |
| In medias res | Grips the reader at once; the past is supplied later through flashback |
Worked example: from observation to analysis
Task: Explain how the first sentence of "The Story of an Hour" prepares for the ending.
Written up: Chopin opens with Mrs Mallard's "heart trouble", apparently as a reason for gentleness, but in fact as the first hint of the ending. By delaying the blow, she lets us share Louise's hour of hope, so that when the heart fails it is not the news of death that kills her, but the news of life.
Tip
Reread the opening after the ending. Most foreshadowing becomes visible only on a second reading. In the exam, show that you know how the beginning looks in the light of the end.
Warning
"What is Foreshadowing?", from the Oregon State Guide to Literary Terms. Note the difference it draws between obvious and subtle foreshadowing, and think about which kind Chopin uses.
Practice
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