Structure in Modern Prose
Senior 6 · Literature in English
Structure in Modern Prose
Lesson 5 of 5
25 min
Style begins with two choices a writer makes thousands of times: how to build a sentence, and which word to use. Look again at sentences you have met in this unit:
The first is an exclamation without a verb; the second makes us wait for its main clause; the third balances opposite against opposite; the fourth gives us nothing but a plain action. None is better than the others. Each fits its purpose.
Definition
| Type | Pattern | Example |
|---|---|---|
| Simple | One main clause | The bus passed Nyanza. |
| Compound | Main + main | Okonkwo was feared, yet he was afraid of one thing. |
| Complex | Main + subordinate | Although he was famous, Okonkwo feared failure. |
| Compound-complex | Main + main + subordinate | When the door opened, Brently walked in, and Louise fell. |
| Type | Job | Example |
|---|---|---|
| Declarative | States | The letter remains sealed. |
| Interrogative | Asks | Do you not want to know who has taken it? |
| Imperative | Commands, invites | Close up those barren leaves. |
| Exclamatory | Expresses strong feeling | What a plunge! |
| Process | How it works | Examples |
|---|---|---|
| Affixation (derivation) | Add a prefix or suffix | mis-shapes (Wordsworth), un-reliable, kindness, modernism |
| Compounding | Join two words | grip-sack, travel-stained (Chopin), bride-cake, notebook |
| Conversion | Change word class with no change of form | a text becomes to text; to email; a must |
| Clipping | Shorten a word | exam (examination), lab, phone |
| Blending | Fuse parts of two words | smog (smoke + fog), brunch, chortle (chuckle + snort, invented by Lewis Carroll in 1871) |
| Acronym and initialism | Use first letters | UNESCO (said as a word); REB (said letter by letter) |
| Back-formation | Remove what looks like an affix | edit from editor; babysit from babysitter |
| Borrowing | Take a word from another language | safari (from Kiswahili), genre (from French) |
| Coinage | Invent a new word | serendipity (Horace Walpole, 1754); robot (from Karel Čapek's play R.U.R., 1920) |
Why it matters in literature. Writers coin and compound to compress meaning. Chopin's "travel-stained" packs a whole journey into one adjective, and its ordinariness is the shock: Brently has had a dull, dusty trip while his wife has lived through her greatest hour.
Worked example: changing the sentence, changing the effect
Plain version: The door opened and Brently came in and Louise died. (compound, flat)
Each version tells the same events; the structure decides where the reader's attention falls.
Tip
Name the type, then the effect. "This is a periodic sentence" earns little. "This periodic sentence delays the word 'death' until the end, so the reader is hit by it exactly as Mrs Mallard is" earns analysis marks.
Warning
"The 4 English Sentence Types", from Adam's English Lessons on engVid. Watch how he builds each type from the one before, then test yourself on the table above.
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